Dark Sploosh

Okay then, let's see. I'll admit I'm not used to short stories at all. Whenever I read something like this I instinctively assume it's the first chapter of something, so ...

Okay then, this was my thought process as I read this piece. That first huge paragraph had me thinking that you were falling into purple prose, and my ability to ...

Author's Note: Child is a working title. If anyone has a better title, or thinks that Child is a fine name, let me know. Enjoy. Child by Dark Sploosh It ...

Well, after reading through this and the reviews that are already here, I realize that the reason it's so hard for me to find stuff to criticize is because you've ...

This is the first story I've given a gold star on this site so far. I think that sets the mood for this review, or at least I want to ...

Author's Note: I apologize for this being so long, but I couldn't see any way to make this two separate chapters. I hope the length doesn't scare anyone off. Please ...

Well, this is a nice bit of antidote after Twilight destroyed vampires for me forever. This review is going to be shorter than the ones I usually write, chiefly because ...

I never bother to go through a chapter play-by-play and point out every little error (tried it once, hated it), and there are always other people who do that, so ...

IMPORTANT: This and chapter 1 are both first drafts. Oooold first drafts. I've posted the first chapter of the third draft, which is the latest, so go read that instead. ...

Thanks a lot for the reviews, and don't worry about me writing more. The entire book is already done, has been for a few months now, so this is so ...

Hey. Usually I don't have a lot of great things to say early on in anything. I only gush about stuff I like after I've become engrossed in a story ...

Hmm...this one threw me off at first, because I'm not used to reading something in the present tense. Not that I'm going to hold that against the work, of course. ...

Well, you can learn a lot about me from my profile, but specifically: My other hobbies include video games and anime, and talking about human sexuality with other people. My ...

I've always considered myself a hopeless romantic, and it's always bugged me that there aren't many romance novels out there targeted towards men. A lot of the ones I've seen ...

Same as my profile picture. This is the first time I've ever had a picture taken of me that I immediately liked. Sort of wished I had shaved, though.